Cold email audit

Find out exactly why your cold emails are not getting replies

You are sending. People are opening. Almost nobody is replying. An audit tells you which specific lines are costing you the reply — and gives you the rewritten version to send instead.

24-hour turnaround · money-back if it is not useful

The problem is almost never "the email was too long"

Most cold email advice stops at generic rules — keep it short, add a CTA, personalize the first line. That advice is cheap and everywhere, and it is not why your sequence is failing. Reply rates usually collapse for one of four concrete reasons: the opener is about you instead of them, the offer asks for too much too early, the targeting is wrong so the message could never have landed, or the mail is not reaching the inbox at all. An audit distinguishes which one you actually have.

What you get

  • A line-by-line review of one full sequence — not just the first email
  • The three highest-impact reply-killers, ranked by what they are costing you
  • A rewritten opener and subject line you can paste in immediately
  • A deliverability check: SPF, DKIM, DMARC, and inbox placement signals
  • A plain-English summary of what to change first, second, and third

How it works

  • Send us the sequence you are running now, plus who you are targeting
  • We review it against the same framework we use on our own outbound
  • You get the written audit back within 24 hours
  • If it is not useful, you do not pay — no negotiation required

Who this is for

Small B2B lead-gen and sales-development agencies, B2B SaaS founders and heads of sales, sales and recruiting consultants, and fractional sales leaders — teams already running their own outbound who need it to work better, not a platform to replace it. If you have not sent your first campaign yet, a sequence build is the better starting point.

Questions

Frequently asked questions

How much does a cold email audit cost?

The Cold Email Audit + Rewrite is $97 and is delivered within 24 hours. A full outbound system setup covering deliverability, list quality, offer, and a complete multi-step sequence is $497. Both are money-back if you do not find them useful.

How long does it take?

The $97 audit is delivered within 24 hours of receiving your sequence. The $497 outbound system setup takes about five days because it includes list and deliverability analysis plus a full sequence build.

What do you need from me to start?

The cold email or full sequence you are currently sending, a short description of who you are targeting, and — if you have it — your current open, reply, and bounce rates. That is enough to start.

Do you rewrite the emails or just critique them?

Both. A critique on its own is not actionable. Every audit includes at least one fully rewritten opener and subject line you can send as-is.

What if the real problem is deliverability, not copy?

Then we tell you that, and the copy rewrite is beside the point until it is fixed. Every audit includes a deliverability check specifically so you do not spend weeks rewriting emails that were never reaching the inbox.

Next step

Start small and judge the work before you commit

Send one cold email for a free micro-teardown, or go straight to the $150 teardown. Both come back within 24 hours.